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Tweak says, "Tweaktacular!"

shoot you in the head is my rob zombie cover band (zombiephile) wrote,
@ 2010-08-16 13:08:00

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game: breach

sorry :[
Dawn, Sab, Wolfie, ... I'm sorry. Elphias' history is already 1924 words long, and that's just through childhood and school (and the summer after school). I'll try to be more brief with "recent history" ... but the dude's got 80 years of that left to fill in, including 3 wives, 8 kids, and vigilantism.

Don't kill me? :D

- "Recent" history
- Finish personality
- Strengths / Weaknesses
- Magical Strengths / Weaknesses
- Previous Jobs (to be filled in as history is written)
- Samples

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	katling 2010-08-16 09:11 pm UTC (link)
	lol Hey, Abe's history is about 2700 words and that's after re-writing or removing paragraphs to keep it concise. I left out about three paragraphs on his time in Europe and rewrote both his before and during school sections. :D And Abe's history is likely to be far less cluttered than Elphias' because Abe was hellbent on revenge, not actually having a life! XD (Reply to this) (Thread)

	zombiephile 2010-08-16 09:29 pm UTC (link)
	Victoria had 1341 for the first two sections, 1765 for the whole history section. For Audrey, I had 1445 for the first two sections, 2822 for the whole history section. At this rate, Elphias will probably surpass 3000. :X I fail at "concise" ... (Reply to this) (Parent)

	hafren 2010-08-17 06:50 pm UTC (link)
	LMAO. Just make it interesting! Seriously though, the older a character is, the longer the history has to be by necessity and Alphias is ancient and all. ;) Although Marlene isn't that old and I ended up with it being way long, and if I were actually turning it into a game that I wasn't modding, I think I'd have had to cleaned it up. (Reply to this) (Thread)

zombiephile
2010-08-17 10:39 pm UTC (link)

Interesting? You got it, dude. xD

I should put that as his age. "Ancient." I think my favorite part about him is that he gets to knock Abe off his Oldest Dude In The Game pedestal. :D And I also so want him to at some point tell those young whippersnappers to pull their pants up properly and stop listening to that rock and-or roll music and to get off his damn lawn, but he actually more of the huggable old man than the crotchety kind, so he'd probably just invite them in for pie and milk.

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	hafren 2010-08-18 06:09 pm UTC (link)
	LOL. Ancient as an age would be fantastic. (Reply to this) (Parent)